Saturday, April 7, 2012

Crookedstar

Crookedstar had such a hard and sad life. When he was born his name was stormkit. His mother perffered him over his brother oakkit. Stormkit wanted to be the most fearsom warrior riverclan has ever seen. But when he spotted a medicine cat from another clan on Riverclan territory, he tryed to chase it away until the cat threatened him and chased Stormkit and Oakkit over stepping stones. Stormkit slipped, hit his head on a rock and slipped into the river. After waking up in his medicine cat's den ,his mother would not even look at him because his jaw was crooked. His mother then talked to her mate Shellheart. The riverclan warrior was furious that his mate would refuse to love her own kit because of Stormkit's accident. Stormkit's mother re-named him Crookedkit, because of his jaw.

When Crookedkit became Crookedpaw, a strange "Starclan" cat named Mapleshade came to him. She offered him a great destiny, if he would make one promise. Without thinking, he agreed to the promise, but could such a simply promise, destroy his clan?

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  1. That's a very sad story :( I can't believe his mom would not care for him. You said he faced many challanges as he grew, do you think his challanges were harder than the other warriors becuse of his crooked jaw?

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  2. Well he had trained later then other apprentices. He trained for four seasons (4 years) and most apprentices only train for 6 moons (6 mounths). His brother was made a warrior on the day crookedkit was made crookedpaw a apprentice. But he was being trained by a starclan cat in his dreams. Thats how he caught up to everyone. But he could not tell anyone. He made a promise to the starclan cat mapleshade he would put his clan first. But when he fell in love with a she-cat mapleshade did verything she could you get rid of her but crookedjaw protected her. When the she cat died having crookedjaws kits he promised to protect his daughter silverstream. But when he saw her being mates with a thunderclan cat she died having kits. Mapleshade was the one who caused her to die. But crookedstars odl friend form starclan told him it was his time to go to starclan where he found his family and no mapleshade.

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    1. Wow, that's cool and it sounds like Crookedpaw had a hard life compared to the other warriors. Would you say that's true?

      Do you mean to say that Warriors can train in their dreams with the help of starclan? Do they train humans because I need to learn a few things myself :)

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